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Logic In Wonderland by *MakeShiftSoul:iconMakeShiftSoul:

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"We're all mad Here!"

Yes.
Well, if you're mad There
and I'm Here as well
that means I'm mad too!
And if Here is There
and that is Everywhere,
then one would think
that includes you!
I'm mad,
you're mad,
we're all mad
HERE.
And if Everywhere is Anywhere
that makes the whole world
There
and if Here is There or Anywhere,
that would make the whole world mad too!
It's a mad, mad place
when Everyone is mad.
It's a funny, funny place
in this crazy land
but if the world is mad
and we are too,
Here, There, Anywhere
even to Timbuktu,
and if the whole world is mad
and thinks the same,
then that would mean
no one is mad
everyone is just very,very sane.
©2005-2009 *MakeShiftSoul
:iconmakeshiftsoul:

Author's Comments

YAY! ANOTHER POEM! FINALLY!

...I told you guys I'd have another poem dealing with Alice in Wonderland.
Here's the first one: [link]

^.^ I love this piece. Thanks to Inno//Tiv's short convo on Inno's most recent journal, and playing my newfound obsession, American McGee's Alice, came this. This has actually been floating in my head ever since I first fell in love with Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, but I never put it to paper ((read: WordPad)). I'm proud of this! --because it's true. If they were all mad, that means Alice was mad too!...And she was.--

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=InnoTenshi Jun 28, 2005, 3:42:03 PM
That makes absolute nonesense.

And nonesense is goodsense, so this is a great piece.

Indeed we are all mad here, else we wouldn't be here, there, beyond me here.

"You... may have noticed... that ... I'm ... not .. all.. .there ... myself. Hm hm hmm hmm hmmmm ... And the momeraths... outgrahahahabe!"

/^\ /^\
/ -- \ ----------- / -- \
--/ -- \/ \/ -- \--
---/ () () \---
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I dunno if that will show up correctly but it's a face ... of the Cheshire... done really quick in notepad... you know like those drawings all made up of computer code? Yeah I tried... I don't think it worked but meh lol


~ Inno

--
I would know you.
:iconinnotenshi:
=InnoTenshi Jun 28, 2005, 3:46:28 PM
No it didn't work. Damn. Here, try this...

[link]

--
I would know you.
:iconkishe:
~Kishe Jun 28, 2005, 4:31:56 PM
Finally.

Hehe. Just kidding. Great peice!! I love it!!

Fav for j00!!

:glomp:
:iconmakeshiftsoul:
*MakeShiftSoul Jun 28, 2005, 5:48:05 PM
:heart:

Glad you like it so much...thought you might ^_^

:mangapunksai:
-Muffy

--
Dream forever
:iconmakeshiftsoul:
*MakeShiftSoul Jun 28, 2005, 5:48:51 PM
Cuuuuute! =^.^=

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Dream forever
:iconmakeshiftsoul:
*MakeShiftSoul Jun 28, 2005, 5:50:46 PM
nonono, finally is okay to say...I know lol. It isn't my fault inspiration ran dry...rather, it was poured into my story and my rpg....ooh well. *shrugs*

EEEEE FAVORITE! :heart:
Thank you soo much!

:mangapunksai:

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Dream forever
:iconhighlyflammableman:
~HighlyFlammableMan Jun 28, 2005, 5:54:37 PM
Simply wonderful. I love it, for what my humble opinion counts. Lovely work as always, dear.
:iconmakeshiftsoul:
*MakeShiftSoul Jun 28, 2005, 5:57:18 PM
::blushes::

Humble opinion??? I love your opinion! It means so very much to me that you sincerely like my work and aren't just giving me compliments because you feel you have to...you really think that and if you didn't, you would say otherwise.

:heart:

glad you love it.

:mangapunksai:

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Dream forever
:icontehpumpkinking:
~TehPumpkinking Jun 28, 2005, 6:07:06 PM
Fancy! (Ya know I've had Americann McGee's Alice for a few years or so now. And it wasn't until a month or so ago that I decided to actually beat it? Heh...Good game, good game ^^)
I like thish. Good job =P

--
Amor est vitae essentia.
:penguin:
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