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"I love you"s
and
"We'll be together forever"s
blip across the screen.
They make me smile
while at the computer;
they catch my breath
when seen on my cell,
peeked at during class.

Kisses stolen in the middle
of the bookstore,
and secret laughs
that are too loud
to be liked by the managers,
are daily things.

Shared Pepsis and Dr.Peppers,
feeding eachother spoonfuls
of ice cream,
and always getting the
RED SKITTLES
back when a handful
of the candy is taken,
are precious.

Giggling at the stupidest things,
and having so many
"our songs"...

The things that make us laugh
-no matter what-.

Those stupid flash animations
and strange comedians
and little kid cartoons
and Prozzak
and your Legos
and my teddy bears
and your dolls
and my coloring books
and our silly cliche love songs...

are jewels.

All our nicknames
all our jokes
all the time.

Ever
After
Always, baby.


~~**~~As Long As the Moebius Strip Runs~~**~
©2006-2009 *MakeShiftSoul
:iconmakeshiftsoul:

Author's Comments

^^; Silly little love poem.

Written late-ish.


:boogie: for no structure???

:D


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:iconinnotenshi:
.... You said it perfectly.

You mind if I show this to Luus ? It's just right.



I really like that part --

"and having so many
'our songs'..."

*giggles*

:D



Lovely.


:glomp:!




:heart:
~ i

--
I would know you.
:iconloveletter2no1:
awee, that's adorable! <3 :D I love it!
:iconmakeshiftsoul:
*Giggles*

Share it with whom you choose!!

:heart:

Danke schoen for the favorite, lovedove.

^_^

:mangapunksai:

--
Dream forever
:iconmakeshiftsoul:
^___^

Glad you love it!

:dance: That means I'm doin' somethin' right!

:mangapunksai:

--
Dream forever
:icontadashichizoko:
Interesting structure....

I like it. :D

--
Arguing on the internet is like winning a race in the special olympics; even if you win, you're still retarded.
:iconmakeshiftsoul:
:XD:

Thanks! ^_^


:mangapunksai:

--
Dream forever
:iconinnotenshi:
You KNOW you deserve it.


:glomp:

Silly fey.




^^

~ i

--
I would know you.
:iconx-frankenstein-x:
Ugh ugh ugh! Why didn't I read this sooner?


I absolutely LOVE this poem Muffy. It's, wow. Very good, and most definately not silly.





Keep up the wonderful work deary :D :hug: :kiss:


:brazensix:
-Marion.

--
"But if we stay or walk away,
There's one thing that's true,
I still love you.
I still love you."

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